Adam/Eve is a Sim story that takes place in a post-apocalpytic version of Sunset Valley, where only a few survivors are left: including the grand daughter of Dina Caliente; Fatima.
Fatima Caliente lives in a state of eternal fear of the night, because when nighttime comes – Adam, Eve and their Children come out to find and kill the survivors.
Told through a series of flashbacks and flashforwards, you will unwrap the intricate weaving storyline and see exactly how Sunset Valley ended up desolate and littered with the bodies of the innocents.
This is the link to the whole site in case any chapter links malfunction!
I've read all your chapters so far (five)! It is a very interesting story: brooding, grim and violent... scary! I've written comments to each of the chapters. The last one is unfortunately much longer than I intended to. Don't hesitate to throw it out, but please, please let me know your thoughts. You can email me/PM me if you like! I will definitely be checking on new updates regularly.
I was delighted with your in-depth reply. I also was more than ever determined to read more... even if I have a natural built-in protection mechanism that tells me to stay away from too violent a story. It failed me until now and it will fail me whenever I read your hypnotic lines.
Your story is well thought out, the lines are cool, direct and flowing... the pictures create an avalanche of emotions. You are without doubt an extremely talented storyteller.
After reading Snake, I decided that there was only one remedy for it. I've put a link in my site as a token of respect. It also makes it easier to follow your updates. What's more, note (!) that I will read this story to it's bitter (or maybe not so bitter) end.
I am hooked.
Last Edit: Nov 3, 2009 20:06:40 GMT -5 by moondaisy
Well done! Left a message on your site. I have great admiration for the way you tell a story. You have got me shivering and hiding in the city... don't want to meet Adam and don't want to meet Eve. But I hope her sister and Dina will be alright... If I was there, I'd fight against terror right beside them!