pinkfiend1
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Post by pinkfiend1 on Feb 21, 2011 14:37:30 GMT -5
Lhasa yours is great. Really creepy. Is there going to be another part?
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Post by persephonetree on Mar 3, 2011 0:48:33 GMT -5
I always look at these prompts and want to join in, but end up getting swamped. Just a little exercise to help me get in the writing mood more. Here goes:
"Ooooh, AJ, you're in so much trouble." "No, I'm not! I didn't even do anything." "Yes, you are. Mommy's going to be so mad at you." "Not unless you tell on me, she won't." "You're such a stupid, McStupid head! How is she not gonna find out that you broke her vase?" "It's called the no snitch rule, you dummy." "Hey! I'm no dummy, maybe I'll let Mommy know you're calling me bad words too!" "Katie, can you stop talking for a second and just help me pick the vase up?!" "Fine."
"The vase doesn't look fine, AJ." "Do you think I'm blind? I can see it fine." "Whatcha gonna do about it?" "I don't know! Just stop talking for a second, and let me think."
"Maybe we shouldn't have played with it like Mommy said, AJ." "You think!?"
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pinkfiend1
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Post by pinkfiend1 on Mar 3, 2011 12:58:37 GMT -5
That was funny. It sounds really real.
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Post by rad on Mar 3, 2011 13:08:02 GMT -5
Loved it, persephonetree!
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Post by mdpthatsme on Mar 3, 2011 16:11:51 GMT -5
Absolutely wonderful persephonetree!
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Post by persephonetree on Mar 3, 2011 22:37:36 GMT -5
Wow, thank you all! I'm glad you like it It definitely brought me back to my early years, haha.
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