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Post by mdpthatsme on May 26, 2010 15:08:15 GMT -5
Ever get that feeling when your unenthused, unmotivated, and indifferent? Apathy is the inability to feel "normal" human feelings. Thus, we can create cerial killers and assassins. Or how about the loner high school student? We can have fun (mayhem, destruction) with this one. bubble juice
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Post by pinkfiend1 on Feb 20, 2011 17:47:56 GMT -5
I'm not sure if this is quite right or not. It has a bigger purpose in the end, just like the other prompts do. Or will if I ever get around to it.
I can’t think. Can’t breathe. Can’t feel. It is all numb. Everything has disappeared into nothingness. Disappeared into a big black hole. I’m meant to feel free. Because when you lose everything, all your senses, all emotions, all beliefs, all the constraints of a mortal life. You are free, unburdened. Unchained. An unchained melody. A discord more like. How could she have thought that this was the answer. It felt, no not felt; she couldn’t feel, it was wrong, maybe more wrong than feeling. No not that wrong. People feared her, distrusted her, like before, except they didn’t insult her; nobody dared, this way she didn’t feel, feel any of it, didn’t feel anything at their fear. Didn’t care that nobody trusted her, nobody wanted to be her friend. She had a reason to be how she was. She could punish everyone on the list so easily, so simply, it wouldn’t even be a challenge. But she wouldn’t feel anything at their demise, although if she had maybe she wouldn’t have gone through with it.
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Post by mdpthatsme on Feb 21, 2011 12:05:36 GMT -5
OOOOOOOHHH!!! So interesteed in this story! Greatly done!
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Post by pinkfiend1 on Feb 21, 2011 14:38:21 GMT -5
Thankyou.
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Post by Velvet on Feb 21, 2011 18:26:26 GMT -5
Me like Pink! I want to know what she's done! More pretty please? I did a little something for this prompt called The Lonely Road. Mdpthatsme, you come up with the best prompts!
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Post by rad on Feb 21, 2011 18:31:58 GMT -5
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Post by rad on Feb 21, 2011 18:32:08 GMT -5
(Sorry, just had to. I'm sure this prompt will crop up somewhere soon) Velvet and Pink, your pieces were just... *shrug*. (Actually, they were awesome, but that doesn't seem in the spirit of the prompt )
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Post by mdpthatsme on Feb 21, 2011 20:13:41 GMT -5
Thank you, Velvet. I try very hard to make prompts for us all to get awsay from the initial stress of our regular stories, to break writer's block, or just to write for fun. Your story was excellent and the background for the story that you provided afterwards helped give even a better visual of the setting. Rad ;D I mean
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Post by pinkfiend1 on Feb 22, 2011 13:47:40 GMT -5
Thankyou Rad.
Md: Oh wow. That was fantastic I got all goosepimply. Absolutely brilliant.
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Post by mdpthatsme on Feb 22, 2011 20:43:59 GMT -5
Thank you? I haven't written a story for this yet......
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Post by fashionista on Feb 23, 2011 10:49:56 GMT -5
Pink and Velvet, that was really some excellent writing!
This promt seemed interesting, so I wrote a little something:
I grip the cold gun as I looked down at the woman huddled in the corner, tears streaming down her bruised face, her hands clutching battered cross holding it out in front of her she screams for me to stop. But I hear nothing, feel nothing. Life has no meaning; we go through the same routine, do the same things, every single day of our mundane lives and for what? Nothing, our reward is death, so what is the point of it all. I stalk closer to her, bringing the gun up to her chest, and I pull the trigger. Blood oozes out of the wound and onto the empty floor, I am helping her, helping her from suffering the mundane quality of life itself. She reaches out for help, but I turn away, I feel nothing, I’m cold, black, and empty inside.
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Post by Velvet on Feb 24, 2011 17:31:20 GMT -5
Wow Portia, what a cold creature! I felt for the woman who was pleading for help. Good writing hon .
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Post by fashionista on Feb 25, 2011 12:01:02 GMT -5
Thanks Rebecca! I didn't really like writing it that much, it's to sad and morbid, I'm more of a happy person in real life
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