somuchsong
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...certainement disaster
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Post by somuchsong on Oct 17, 2010 17:54:39 GMT -5
I just caught up with this recently and I loved it! I think I was hooked from the first chapter.
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Post by rad on Oct 17, 2010 18:32:15 GMT -5
Thank you both!
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Post by rad on Oct 27, 2010 17:20:40 GMT -5
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Post by rad on Nov 7, 2010 10:39:34 GMT -5
New chapter. This was hard, and it ended up being too much of an info dump. Blah. 16. Assignation
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Post by dbloveshermac on Nov 8, 2010 11:00:21 GMT -5
NOT an info dump. The thoughts and reactions of the various staff were intriguing. "They" are gradually becoming a group of distinct persons driven by varied sub-agendas, as opposed to the amorphous army of threatening power.
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Post by rad on Nov 8, 2010 18:54:03 GMT -5
The real threatening power isn't the staff team, or at least not the majority of them. The council, though... brrrrr...
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Post by rad on Nov 16, 2010 17:41:06 GMT -5
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Post by rad on Nov 24, 2010 17:25:10 GMT -5
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Post by sb on Nov 24, 2010 19:10:03 GMT -5
A difficult chapter...and exquisitely accomplished!
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Post by rad on Dec 3, 2010 20:25:17 GMT -5
Thank you both! I managed to write chapter 19 in Germany, just need to sim it out now.
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Post by dbloveshermac on Dec 3, 2010 23:05:51 GMT -5
~wondering if the Cleavers might be in the next chapter~
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Post by rad on Dec 6, 2010 14:52:34 GMT -5
Nope! But the next chapter is out! 19. Breaking Point. You'll see the Cleavers again before Christmas.
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Post by rad on Dec 15, 2010 18:28:07 GMT -5
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Post by sb on Dec 16, 2010 7:23:03 GMT -5
Wonderful complicated piece, beautifully written. I love reading the comments; it's fascinating to see the different ways thoughtful readers interpret a very complicated situation. Beautiful work!
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Post by dbloveshermac on Dec 16, 2010 10:16:05 GMT -5
The long-awaited reappearance! Deep emotions here. Interesting choice to give us the announcement from a perspective other than the Cleavers.
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Post by rad on Dec 16, 2010 19:11:03 GMT -5
Thank you both. The Cleavers have been sitting on this one a little while, so I thought it would be better explored from the Domans' POV.
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Post by rad on Dec 23, 2010 19:44:13 GMT -5
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Post by rad on Jan 2, 2011 15:39:03 GMT -5
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Post by rad on Jan 15, 2011 19:16:16 GMT -5
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Post by rad on Jan 27, 2011 14:36:32 GMT -5
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