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Post by moondaisy on Nov 11, 2009 13:05:20 GMT -5
Hi Carnaxa, I just love it and left a message on your site! The tension is building in an exquisitely refined and subtle way... great techniques here!  |
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Post by girlyesterday on Nov 12, 2009 0:00:37 GMT -5
Rad - I do too. Mallory just seems so much older than her actual age.
Raquel - Thanks for reading!
Moondaisy - Thanks Moondaisy. I'm just glad it didn't feel like an information dump. That's always the concern when I have to reveal a heap of data.
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Post by girlyesterday on Nov 16, 2009 23:21:46 GMT -5
Chapter Thirteen now up. You also get Chapter Fourteen on Friday - unusual for me to schedule two chapters in one week but it's a special occasion. I will say the room revelation is coming up ... eventually :-P
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Post by moondaisy on Nov 25, 2009 21:07:36 GMT -5
Dear Carnaxa!
I hope you are having a wonderful trip.
May I say how impressed I was by the care you lavish on your readers? How thoughtful to schedule more updates while you are away...
I was away for a bit, I have caught up apart from the the stories waiting for 'transfer' in your absence.
Miss you.
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Post by Summer on Nov 26, 2009 1:37:02 GMT -5
I apsolutely love the story and wish that one day I could write and take pictures as well.
My favorite character is Mallory. She is extremely adorable.
I hope you follow through!
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Post by sb on Dec 5, 2009 13:04:17 GMT -5
Incredible work. I read the whole series this morning and was totally enthralled. You cut to the bone with your writing. I love it.
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Post by girlyesterday on Dec 10, 2009 1:21:33 GMT -5
Moondaisy - Thanks for the kind words. I had a blast. Am back, a bit jet lagged but I survived.
Summer - I would say yes, I am following through with the story. It ends next week :-) Thanks for the interest.
SB - Thank you for reading the story. Sorry for the late response. I've been away for the past two weeks in what I like to call, "Hellish cold weather!"
Chapter 17 is up. One more chapter to go.
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Post by Summer on Dec 12, 2009 19:35:36 GMT -5
omg! your the most suspenseful writer EVER!  |
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Post by girlyesterday on Dec 16, 2009 17:54:48 GMT -5
And so, we've come to the final chapter of Inside Hope Springs. I'm going to miss writing this story but all things must come to an end.
Thanks for reading everyone.
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Post by rad on Dec 16, 2009 18:43:34 GMT -5
I loved the ending. Well done on such a great story, and I look forward to whatever you have in store next...
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Post by raquelaroden on Dec 17, 2009 6:36:37 GMT -5
Congratulations on finishing your story! I left a comment on your site, but I thought a congratulations was in order here . I hope we get to see more of your writing soon. |
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Post by moondaisy on Dec 17, 2009 7:38:42 GMT -5
Thank you for sharing your story with us! It was an amazing read, thought-provoking and full of suspense. I love your writing style and the photography is stunning. Congratulations!
Big hugs!
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