Ruin

[raquelaroden]

*sigh*

You make me wish I were a better writer....truly amazing writing, Lunar.

[thelunarfox]

You're kidding! Do you know how often I end up re-reading some of your chapters? Especially Sean chapters. You've won me over with him, lol.

But thank you.

[lhasa]

I agree with raquelaroden. Your writing is amazing. <3

[moondaisy]

I second that! You make me think for hours about what you write... I even dream of it.

[thelunarfox]

Thank you guys, so very much.

Moondaisy, do you really? I haven't had a dream about them in forever, if ever. I think I have, but I can't remember. And I fall asleep thinking about these guys most nights.

[moondaisy]

Oh yes... and ever since Killer did what he did it turned into a nightmare. You never said, but I hope he did not ravish her?

[laura]

Moondaisy, I wondered that too, but I didn't want to ask because I'm not sure if I want to know :\

[somuchsong]

Hmmm, I've been operating under the assumption that he did and it actually never occurred to me that he may not have. He's not the kind of character I'd give the benefit of the doubt to.

[thelunarfox]

I pretty much had Carla's thinking. It never occurred to me that there would be any doubt.

I don't know if I'm going to do a profile on Killer, but sex for him is very much a power trip. And he's the sort that would pick on ones that are weaker and less skilled than he is.



So with that, lol, new chapter! We're back to Paula.

[laura]

That's what I feared

Did Jimmy at least get to her first? Because the last we heard, he hadn't, but that was a good few years before the end.

[thelunarfox]

I never say an outright no, but I highly doubt it.

[thelunarfox]

New update.

[raquelaroden]

Eeee!

[sb]

I just have to say that your writing accelerates through every dark place, a terrible and perfect fairytale. Candlelight writing. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[thelunarfox]

Thank you, sb. I'm still always amazed anyone reads at all, to be honest.

[thelunarfox]

Right on time again.

[raquelaroden]

I left a rather lengthy comment this time...fascinating chapter!

[thelunarfox]

Oh, thank you! I love Rachel comments. Plus, I felt so weird with this chapter. It's just standing around talking, but it's an important stepping stone.

[lhasa]

I always feel so bad for leaving short comments. : ( I do have a lot to say, but it's hard to word things.

I'll figure it out eventually.

[mdpthatsme]

AHHH! I finally caught up...YAY! I love it! ...well who doesn't?

cheesecake and apple pie